Fifty characters could be all that stands between you and success in your next email campaign. Why? Because fifty characters is all the space you have in a typical subject line to catch your reader’s eye and entice him/her to open your email and take the action you want.
How could something so small make or break an email’s success? Because so many recipients use the subject line to decide whether to open or delete an email.
This makes subject lines tricky little devils to write. Today and tomorrow, I’ll explore 10 rules for crafting a good one. Today, the first 5…
1. READ THE NEWSPAPER: If you want to write a better subject line, pick up your local paper. The headline usually highlights a story’s most important fact in a limited space. A subject line, as well, should clearly state what your reader can expect from your email, what’s in it for them or what you want them to do.
2. THERE IS NO SURE-FIRE FORMULA: What works in one campaign might bomb with the next. A discount offer should be worded differently from an upsell, and both are different from a “breaking news” announcement.
3. SUPPORT THE “FROM” LINE: The “from” line tells the recipient who sent the email, and the subject lien sells the recipient on opening. If your “from” line lists your company name, you don’t have to repeat it in the subject line, which frees up space. Do consider branding your subject line with the name of the newsletter so that it will stand out in your recipients’ overflowing inboxes.
4. LIST KEY INFO FIRST: Some email clients allow more characters in a subject line than others, but most give you at least 50, including spaces. So, load your key information in that first 50. Also, make sure the cut-off doesn’t occur in a crucial word, such as a price or a date. Test the email and send it to yourself with the proposed subject line to see what it looks like.
5. PERSONALIZE: Personalize subject lines based on users’ product or content preferences, interests, past purchases, web visits, or links clicked. Be careful when personalizing on past purchases, however, because the purchase could have been a gift for someone else and may not relate to your reader’s real interests. Always make it easy for your audience to find and update their data and preferences.









